Написал сочинение по . проверьте и исправьте. мне сказали тип времена не правильно стоят. ну и много в общем ошибок. classmates, we agreed to go to the theatre. this was my first visit to the theatre. had to go away, so i left early in the morning. on the way i thought looks like the theater building , what he is inside. when we were at the threshold of the theater, i saw that he was much prettier than i had imagined. then we went inside, inside he was just amazing, the interior struck me. after some time the show started. they put me in a joyful mood , i am so involved in the action that i forget that i am watching a play. this view teaches us to find your way in life. it performance makes you laugh and happy. after the first trip to the theater i can say that i liked the theatre.

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annapetrovakons

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Classmates and i agreed to go to theatre. this was my first time visiting theatre. i had to go (время) so i left early in the morning. on the way to the theatre i was wondering how did theatre look like, what was inside of it. when we reached the threshold of the thatre, i realized that it looked prettier. then we went inside of it, inside of the theatre was so amazing.they put me in a joyful mood, i was invlolved in the action so i forgot that i was watching a play. this view teaches us to find our way in life. the performance made me laugh. after the first visit to the theatre i can say that i like the thatre. думаю так будет лучше

shubinaale

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4,5(98 оценок)

We have agreed ! лучше on my way, а не on the way ! thought how did the theatre look like and what was it in the inside ! was much prettier ! лучше напиши it was amazing there, when we went inside ! the show had started ! they had put me ! i was ! i ! find your own place in life ! its performance, а вообще лучше the performance

Ксюшалебедева

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The letter will have been sent by 11 a.m. tomorrow. i have been reading this book for 2 weeks we shall (или will) be doing our homework at 6 p.m. tomorrow the room was painted last mouth my friend will have translated the text before i come